1. When compled with Cassie's decision ending with a no, it is evident that Cassie was trying to explore and define her identity.
2. This relationship was beginning to suffocate Cassie and that is why she turned to Usher.
3. Usher and Cassie slowly falls in love with each other as they agreed to runaway from home and hitchhike across the USA.
4. This enables Cassie to leave behind her mundane life and become a totally different person to change her identity.
I want it to sound better being written in third person also.How do I reword this sentence?
In deciding to say 'no', Cassie explores and defines her identity.
This suffocating relationship causes Cassie to turn to Usher.
Usher and Cassie slowly fall in love with one another, agreeing to runaway together and hitchhike across America.
This enables Cassie to leave behind her mundane life, transforming into a more independent and decisive person.
