Personal identity is predominantly shaped by one's personal experiences in life, and is influenced by significant events, people, family and peers. It is moulded and confirmed through one檚 interactions with other people in one檚 environment. Identity is often portrayed not as a phenomenon, but as a continuous process. Each person檚 personal identity changes every day, every moment through the expansion of our intelligence and experiences. Like most other human beings, my first real sense of identity was shaped by my parents during conception through heredity, physical appearance, and cultural identity in the earlier stages of my life, thus forming my unique, physical identity which set me apart from other individuals. During my junior high school years, my family was less influential in shaping my cultural identity, friends and the media assumed larger roles in my life. Growing up in a primarily Greek area, my friends constantly reminded me of my cultural identity as a Greek person. However, I read lots of Canadian books, magazines, watched Canadian television, thus causing a shift in my cultural identity from a Greek one to a more Canadian one. Later on in life, I moved houses to a more non-Greek area, where no one spoke Greek and almost everyone spoke English and was Canadian. I was still able to, however, retain the best cultural traits from both races. Canadians are individualistic, while Greeks are more family oriented and dependent. In addition, Greeks have a very relaxed attitude while Canadians tend to be too stressed out. However, I am able to balance these two extremes. I was able to combine the two, learning to be independent while at the same time still highly cherishing my family and ethnic origin. My family is a symbol that best represents who I am. Over the years, I have observed many of the behaviours, mannerisms, and personality traits of my family, and as a result of living with them and sharing their genes, I have realized how similar to them I really am. If I act a certain way, talk a certain way, live a certain way, it檚 because my family has had such a profound impact on me and because I檝e lived around and learned from them for so long. Identity in my opinion, is determined by the people who surround you. Essentially, I am what my family is, thus making my family the symbol that best (yet not completely) represents who I am. Though one檚 identity is embodied by one檚 personal experiences in life, and is influenced by several people, it is up to us to decide whom we ultimately want to be.I NEED HELP SHORTENING THIS PARAGRAPH!! ANY IDEAS PLEASE HELP!! I BEG AND SUPPLICATE YOU ALL! DUE TOMORROW ! U?
Personal identity is predominantly shaped by one's personal experiences in life, and is influenced by significant events, people, family and peers. It is moulded and confirmed through one檚 interactions with other people in one檚 environment. Identity is often portrayed not as a phenomenon, but as a continuous process. Each person檚 personal identity changes every day, every moment through the expansion of our intelligence and experiences. Like most other human beings, my first real sense of identity was shaped by my parents during conception through heredity, physical appearance, and cultural identity in the earlier stages of my life, thus forming my unique, physical identity which set me apart from other individuals. During my junior high school years, my family was less influential in shaping my cultural identity, friends and the media assumed larger roles in my life. However, I read lots of Canadian books, magazines, watched Canadian television, thus causing a shift in my cultural identity from a Greek one to a more Canadian one. Later on in life, I moved houses to a more non-Greek area, where no one spoke Greek and almost everyone spoke English and was Canadian. I was still able to, however, retain the best cultural traits from both races. Canadians are individualistic, while Greeks are more family oriented and dependent. In addition, Greeks have a very relaxed attitude while Canadians tend to be too stressed out. However, I am able to balance these two extremes. I was able to combine the two, learning to be independent while at the same time still highly cherishing my family and ethnic origin. Over the years, I have observed many of the behaviours, mannerisms, and personality traits of my family, and as a result of living with them and sharing their genes, I have realized how similar to them I really am. If I act a certain way, talk a certain way, live a certain way, it檚 because my family has had such a profound impact on me and because I檝e lived around and learned from them for so long. Identity in my opinion, Essentially, I am what my family is, thus making my family the symbol that best (yet not completely) represents who I am. Though one檚 identity is embodied by one檚 personal experiences in life, and is influenced by several people, it is up to us to decide whom we ultimately want to be.I NEED HELP SHORTENING THIS PARAGRAPH!! ANY IDEAS PLEASE HELP!! I BEG AND SUPPLICATE YOU ALL! DUE TOMORROW ! U?
Just take out what you feel is extra and stay on topic. i guessI NEED HELP SHORTENING THIS PARAGRAPH!! ANY IDEAS PLEASE HELP!! I BEG AND SUPPLICATE YOU ALL! DUE TOMORROW ! U?
Personal identity is predominantly shaped by one's personal experiences in life, and is influenced by significant events, people, family and peers. Identity is not necessarily a trait, but a continuous process. One's personal identity changes every day through the expansion of our intelligence and experiences. Like most others, my first real sense of identity was shaped by my parents during conception through heredity, physical appearance, and cultural identity in the earlier stages of my life, thus forming my unique physical identity which set me apart from other individuals. During my junior high school years, my family was less influential in shaping my cultural identity as friends and media assumed larger roles in my life. Growing up in a primarily Greek area, my friends constantly reminded me of my cultural identity as a Greek person. However, I read lots of Canadian books, magazines, watched Canadian television, thus causing a shift in my cultural identity from a Greek one to a more Canadian one. Later on in life, I moved houses to a more non-Greek area, where no one spoke Greek and almost everyone spoke English and was Canadian. I was still able to, however, retain the best cultural traits from both races. Canadians are individualistic, while Greeks are more family oriented and dependent. In addition, Greeks have a very relaxed attitude while Canadians tend to stress. However, I am able to balance these two extremes, learning to be independent while still cherishing my family and ethnic origin. My family is a symbol that best represents who I am. Essentially, I am a result of the interactions of my friends and family. Though one檚 identity is embodied by one檚 personal experiences in life and is influenced by several people, it is up to us to decide who we ultimately want to be.I NEED HELP SHORTENING THIS PARAGRAPH!! ANY IDEAS PLEASE HELP!! I BEG AND SUPPLICATE YOU ALL! DUE TOMORROW ! U?
Remove the fluff, get to the point. For example, your 3rd sentence is unnesessary. Its not the amount of %26quot;padding%26quot; you put on your essay but how well the main idea is presented.I NEED HELP SHORTENING THIS PARAGRAPH!! ANY IDEAS PLEASE HELP!! I BEG AND SUPPLICATE YOU ALL! DUE TOMORROW ! U?
I was able to shorten it 135 words. I also changed a couple of things to make more sense of your point. :)
Personal identity is predominantly shaped by one's personal experiences in life. It is molded and conformed through one檚 interactions with other people in their environment. Identity is often portrayed as a continuous process. Each person檚 personal identity changes rapidly through the expansion of our intelligence and experiences. My parents shaped my first sense of unique identity during conception through heredity, physical appearance, and cultural identity in the earlier stages of my life. However, during my junior year in high school, friends and the media assumed larger roles in my life. Growing up in a primarily Greek area, my friends constantly reminded me of my cultural identity as a Greek person. However, I was later exposed to Canadian media after I had moved, causing a shift in my cultural identity. I was still able to, however, retain the best cultural traits from both the Canadian and Greek races. Canadians are individualistic, while Greeks are more family oriented. Greeks have a very relaxed attitude while Canadians tend to be more stressed. But, I am able to balance these two by combining them. I learned to be independent while still highly cherishing my family and ethnicity. My family is a symbol that best represents who I am. Because I lived with my family for so many years, I have observed many of the behaviors, mannerisms, and personality traits they carry causing me to realize our similarities. The way I act, talk, and live is because my family has had such a profound impact on me. In my opinion, the people who surround you determine your identity. My family is the symbol that best represents who I am. Though one檚 identity is embodied by their experiences in life and the people who surround them, it is up to us to decide whom we ultimately want to be.I NEED HELP SHORTENING THIS PARAGRAPH!! ANY IDEAS PLEASE HELP!! I BEG AND SUPPLICATE YOU ALL! DUE TOMORROW ! U?
ONly keep the main ideas and important things and take out the otherI NEED HELP SHORTENING THIS PARAGRAPH!! ANY IDEAS PLEASE HELP!! I BEG AND SUPPLICATE YOU ALL! DUE TOMORROW ! U?
Take out all becauses, and have been, has been, and is
